how could I have done that?
repeating mistakes once again
searching for a purpose
neglecting my chores
negating my small mercies
angst bleeds from my pores
winds smash my face
winter is back breeding my discontent
I tried and I failed
Existentialism
Wednesday, 3 April 2013
NaPoWriMo Day #3
This is from a writing prompt at imaginary garden with real toads...
failed again
how could I have done that?
repeating mistakes once again
searching for a purpose
neglecting my chores
negating my small mercies
angst bleeds from my pores
winds smash my face
winter is back breeding my discontent
I tried and I failed
Existentialism
individual experience
sense of isolation
indifferent environment
responsibility for choices made
how could I have done that?
repeating mistakes once again
searching for a purpose
neglecting my chores
negating my small mercies
angst bleeds from my pores
winds smash my face
winter is back breeding my discontent
I tried and I failed
Existentialism
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Wow...this poem speaks to so many of my days. Too many.
It does seem I have had a bit of this in my life..
pretty dark, Jenn
ALOHA from Honolulu
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negating my small mercies...
This line really struck me. Perhaps we spend too much time searching for reasons while neglecting to live out each day purposefully.
Powerful. The pattern of the life. The angels. That's it.
winter is back breeding my discontent
It certainly is in my little corner of the world! Brrrr!
negating my small mercies
I find that very intriguing.
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