Saturday, 18 July 2009

heron

graceful hunter takes flight
the skies call her name--
sunfish in her belly

heron

3 comments:

Derrick said...

Hi Jenn,

Nice Haiku!

CountryDreaming said...

The last line of your haiku is the most powerful concrete closing that I've seen in I can't remember when. Great job!

Now if my mother the fisherwoman were around, that heron would have to really fight to catch that sunfish. :-)

Jenn Jilks said...

Thank you, both!