If you are unsure about haiku technique, scroll down, or visit my how-to blog post.
True, Western haiku is harder than it looks!
sumac wearing snow hats
blue jays devour red berries
--hawk eyes her preyraccoons dream dreams of spring--
cat awaits with patience
under the bird feeder
Haiku
English-language haiku consist of "three content categories":
(see: E. St Jacques for more examples)
in construction:
2 comments:
I agree with you Jenn that haiku are not easy. As they are mostly in the present tense they rely, I think, upon a sudden image or realisation - they are spontaneous.
How about this one I wrote some time ago:-
Crows sit on the wires
Making black arpeggios
In the evening sky.
Have a good week-end.
I think I remember this one, Weaver, and it is wonderful. It really captures the spirit of haiku. I have been pleased with my latest ones, but keep on writing them, as one can go back and play around with them! Besides, I get an idea and don't want to lose it in a senior's moment!!!
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