Friday 15 May 2009

Skywatch haiku

[IMG_3704.jpg]tree buds foretell spring
clouds dance blown by wind--
skeletons sway in the breeze

4 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Love the image of skeletons swaying in the air!

Jenn Jilks said...

Thank you! The leaves are now much bigger and formed. The skeletons have little hands on them!

Derrick said...

Hi Jenn,

I shall keep watching you and see if I can get the hang of haiku!

Jenn Jilks said...

Derick, I'm not sure I do. But I keep trying. I keep reading the pros, and I believe that it cannot translate from the Orient to N.A., but it is an interesting discipline. So much fun to play with words, metre and rhythm.