Wednesday 15 April 2009

Rain drips like tears

Rain drips like tears pooling cold at my feet
Clouds bring more angst adding to my defeat
Foliage nudged into animation
Spirit jarred wakes from winter's stagnation
Crashing waves punctuate with her downbeat

The shore ice begins its hasty retreat
The birds at the lake shore my sad soul greet
Nature ends her frigid isolation
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Rituals of spring end curb perceived defeat
Greens and blues they colour my world complete
New growth and the smell of growing resurrection
Help me breathe and lessen desperation
Heightens my senses that now are replete
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April PAD Challenge: Day 15
The Rondeau is related to the triolet.

The rondeau is comprised of 15 lines across 3 stanzas with the first word or phrase from the first line represented as a refrain (R) and a rhyme scheme of 2 rhymes throughout (A and B).

The A and B lines are usually 8 or 10 syllables in length. The refrain is usually 1 to 3 words (or so).



RhymeZone rhyming dictionary and thesaurus

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