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Saturday, 18 July 2009

heron

graceful hunter takes flight
the skies call her name--
sunfish in her belly

heron

3 comments:

  1. The last line of your haiku is the most powerful concrete closing that I've seen in I can't remember when. Great job!

    Now if my mother the fisherwoman were around, that heron would have to really fight to catch that sunfish. :-)

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