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Friday, 15 May 2009

Skywatch haiku

[IMG_3704.jpg]tree buds foretell spring
clouds dance blown by wind--
skeletons sway in the breeze
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4 comments:

  1. gautami tripathy15 May 2009 at 21:38

    Love the image of skeletons swaying in the air!

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  2. Jenn Jilks16 May 2009 at 09:28

    Thank you! The leaves are now much bigger and formed. The skeletons have little hands on them!

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  3. Derrick17 May 2009 at 07:05

    Hi Jenn,

    I shall keep watching you and see if I can get the hang of haiku!

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  4. Jenn Jilks17 May 2009 at 09:42

    Derick, I'm not sure I do. But I keep trying. I keep reading the pros, and I believe that it cannot translate from the Orient to N.A., but it is an interesting discipline. So much fun to play with words, metre and rhythm.

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