Monday 7 September 2009

time of the season

coolness lingers on a dewy day
loon mourning in the lake
--one red leaf falls

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coolness lingers
on a dewy day
the loon mourns

in the lake
one red leaf falls

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5 comments:

TSannie said...

Thanks for the visit! Much appreciated!

Your haiku is SO much better than mine, it's just ridiculous! I'll be back!

Jenn Jilks said...

You are very kind, TS! I am not sure I'll ever get the style, but it is fun to try.

Reader Wil said...

This macro photo of yours is an excellent sign that autumn is coming! Thanks for your visit to my recorders. It's not an easy instrument if you want to play it properly. I am going to show more instances of recorder concerts in a few weeks.

Jenn Jilks said...

Thanks, Wil. I will visit you. I used to teach it to my students and went to a summer camp for musical adults. Wonderful opportunity.

Reader Wil said...

Teaching this great instrument makes you an expert. I only played the descant and the treble. Thanks!