Wednesday 9 September 2009

Autumn haiku

crows become restless
gathering in murder
--in a moment they are gone

overhead the cacophony of sound
together they fly in formation
--only the swift and strong shall return

OR... to put it into Tanka:


restless crows
gathering in murder
and cacophony of sound

together they fly in formation
only the quick and strong return


1 comment:

judy in ky said...

Hi Jenn, I need to try some haiku...