Cottage Country Reflections: Skywatch haiku

Friday, 15 May, 2009

Skywatch haiku

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tree buds foretell spring
clouds dance blown by wind--
skeletons sway in the breeze

4 comments:

gautami tripathy said...: Love the image of skeletons swaying in the air!; 15 May, 2009 9:38 PM
Jenn Jilks said...: Thank you! The leaves are now much bigger and formed. The skeletons have little hands on them!; 16 May, 2009 9:28 AM
Derrick said...: Hi Jenn,

I shall keep watching you and see if I can get the hang of haiku!; 17 May, 2009 7:05 AM
Jenn Jilks said...: Derick, I'm not sure I do. But I keep trying. I keep reading the pros, and I believe that it cannot translate from the Orient to N.A., but it is an interesting discipline. So much fun to play with words, metre and rhythm.; 17 May, 2009 9:42 AM

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